By Doreen Yuan
A Review of the Urban-Legend storytelling rules:
1. The comment section is part of the story. All comments are ordered by the number.
2. Comments that include a >> and a number (ex: >>1) are replies to the comment with that number.
3. Anonymous users in the comment section are part of the story. There are multiple anonymous accounts.
4. The main characters named No Longer Human and Curry are part of the story in the comments.
5. Readers can leave messages in the comment section but should not intentionally destroy or try to confuse the coherence of the story.
6. Readers can respond to any anonymous character interaction in the comment section–that response may change and contribute to the story.
7. Do not use inappropriate language.
8. The roles and anonymity in the comment section are created by the primary story author himself.
9. The time of all messages is based on the time of writing.
10. Have fun, and enjoy it.
*This is a continuing story. The last installment was posted December 16, 2019. The story is told through the “Comments” section. Read them carefully.
Editor: Luke Langlois
Anonymous says
229:Anonymous (19:21)
I think you need to turn around and run away. Didn’t you say at the beginning that the light behind you disappears quickly? I think you were unconsciously turned around by the magic tunnel at the very beginning, so now you are moving towards the drums.
Anonymous says
230:Anonymous (19:22)
>>229 What?! If you say so…
Anonymous says
231:Anonymous (19:22)
>>229 is there any other way of saying it?! Can’t you see that there is something wrong with that world?! Don’t touch the drums!!! turn around!!!
Anonymous says
232:Anonymous (19:23)
>>229 no wonder you feel colder… You’re closer to the end…No one mentioned a change of temperature in the previous post!
Anonymous says
233:Anonymous (19:23)
>>229 Does Kisaragi station learn from the people who escaped last time and then adjust to make it harder?
Anonymous says
234:Anonymous (19:23)
>>Run, run, run!!!
No Longer Human says
235:No Longer Human (20:36)
It’s getting closer. I feel dizzy. I feel like vomiting.
Anonymous says
236:Anonymous (19:24)
>>235 hello hello, isn’t that pretty bad??? Stand up and run!!!
Anonymous says
237:Anonymous (19:24)
>>235 Sanity check failed. How has the situation changed so dramatically?! Get a hold of yourself and prove that you’re a Chad.
Anonymous says
238:Anonymous (19:25)
>>235 hurry up!!!
No Longer Human says
239:No Longer Human (20:35)
Wait something’s coming out of the ground
No Longer Human says
240:No Longer Human (20:34)
It must be the same monster as the one on the train
Anonymous says
241:Anonymous (19:26)
>>240 There’s another monster? Do you have the ax?
Anonymous says
242:Anonymous (19:27)
>>240 how many monsters? Can you get around?
No Longer Human says
243:No Longer Human (20:33)
I can’t fight I’m not a fighter
Anonymous says
244:Anonymous (19:27)
>>240 Don’t stop, get out of the tunnel quickly.
Anonymous says
245:Anonymous (19:27)
>>243 Oh god. aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! you have to hurry up and turn around. Anonymous 229 was right! turn back!!!
Anonymous says
246:Anonymous (19:27)
Even the mental strength of No Longer Human is weak???
Anonymous says
247:Anonymous (19:27)
>>243 don’t look at your phone. Just run!!!!!
Anonymous says
248:Anonymous (19:28)
>>243 there must be other reasons to not give up, right? No Longer Human?!!!
Anonymous says
249:Anonymous (19:28)
>>243 can’t you run if you can’t fight!!!?!!!!?
No Longer Human says
250:No Longer Human (20:32)
It’s too late The exit is blocked
No Longer Human says
251:No Longer Human (20:32)
A lot of them came out while I was vomiting against the wall
Anonymous says
252:Anonymous (19:28)
>>250 don’t say discouraging words!!! How can you give up???
No Longer Human says
253:No Longer Human (20:32)
I’m not happy that I didn’t die for love, but I have no idea what to do in this situation
Anonymous says
254:Anonymous (19:29)
>>253 Please come up with some ideas!! Any ideas!!!
No Longer Human says
255:No Longer Human (20:31)
I think it’ll be considered a mysterious disappearance by my colleagues
Anonymous says
256:Anonymous (19:29)
>>253 What are you talking about?!?!?
Anonymous says
257:Anonymous (19:29)
>>253 You don’t want to die, do you? Get up and run!!!
No Longer Human says
258:No Longer Human (20:31)
Thank you so much for your time and help
Anonymous says
259:Anonymous (19:29)
>>253… … We can’t help him… If this post is true, I’m still happy to have met you. I hope you can meet your friends as you wish.
Anonymous says
260:Anonymous (19:29)
>>258 Don’t die in that place
Anonymous says
261:Anonymous (19:29)
>>258 shut up and run!!!!!!
Anonymous says
262:Anonymous (19:30)
>>255 Please cheer up! I’m literally crying. . .
Anonymous says
263:Anonymous (19:30)
>>259 Watch your mouth
Curry says
264:Curry (20:30)
Give me the ax
———————To be continued