How Much Symbolism is Too Much?
By Holden Hartle
I have the pleasure of taking a class with Mr. Griffin. He introduced the idea of symbolism to me when I was a freshman, and now I am reintroduced to it as a senior. He has opened my eyes to a whole new way of reading a story. Currently in class we are discussing short stories. Some ideas are far fetched–like a card game representing the Irish economy. The discussions we have in class explore the story beneath the story, as Mr. Griffin likes to put it.
For example, we read the story A&P by John Updike, in which a teenager quits his job as a cashier to go chase some girls in bikinis. At least, this is the story on the surface level. If you go one level deeper, the story is kind of a coming-of-age story, as the cashier quits his job because it proves that he can be autonomous. You can even go one step deeper and look at the lighting of the story. The “fake” lighting inside the store conveys the illusion that the teenager can actually go out and get these girls, but when he steps into the sunlight, or the “real” lighting, he is met with “reality” and the fact that he can’t get those girls.
But when does symbolism go too far? How deep can you look into a story before your symbolic interpretation just becomes wrong? Well, as with most cases, there are two sides to the story. One side can argue that whatever the reader can extrapolate from the story as symbolism should be taken as such, but the other side may argue that sometimes the author may just want to write something for the sake of writing it. Not all pieces of literature have to have symbolism. The common example is when an author writes, “The curtains were painted blue.” Mr. Griffin and I may look at this sentence and say that the curtains convey the protagonist’s sadness, and possibly his loneliness, when in fact the author may have just written that the curtains were blue, with no intended symbolism whatsoever.
There is another side of the story that raises an interesting question. Sometimes, symbolism reveals secrets about the author, regardless of whether or not they put it in consciously. If we use the curtain example again, what if we were to say that the curtains are blue because the author was feeling depressed at that point in time. Is that fair to say? In my opinion, no. It is unfair to extrapolate symbolism and relate it to the author, because you could stretch an idea to the point that you could say the author is a sexist for using a color primarily associated with boys.
So, yes, Mr. Griffin and the AP Literature class have a grand ol’ time “over analyzing” passages, but there is a point where symbolic analysis becomes too much. Personally, I believe that the author and the piece should remain separate entities. You, as the reader, can take whatever you want out of the story, but what you take from the story shouldn’t fall back onto the author. This has been Holden Rants About a Topic That Isn’t Really Relevant But is Still Kind of Interesting: Part 1.
Editor: AJ Patencio
Christopher Griffin says
Hmmm. I can’t quite determine if Mr. Hartle is hurtling shade my way. Was I wrong to suggest in class today, while discussing Hemingway’s “Hills Like White Elephants,” that the male character, when telling his pregnant girlfriend to come out of the sun and back into the shade within which they’d been sitting, that on an underlying symbolic level he is asking her to let go of her own clear vision of what her pregnancy might mean to her as a woman, and join him again in his male-oriented point of view that sees the pregnancy as a horrible inconvenience and figures that an abortion is no big deal? “Over-analyzing?” Perhaps. But the fact is they are sitting in a train station between two sets of tracks, one going one way and the other going in the opposite direction (to have an abortion or not to have an abortion), and that on one side of the tracks the surrounding landscape is barren, brown, dry (infertile), while on the other side are fields of grain and trees and a river (fertile). Am I imagining it, or is the landscape symbolic and reflective of their own critical options in the face of an unwanted pregnancy? Or is a cigar simply a cigar, and shade simply a relief from the harshness of the afternoon sun?
Christopher Griffin says
Hold on!
I meant to add that the piece is beautifully written.
kenny sarkis says
“Hold on”
a brilliant pun for addressing the author
kenny sarkis says
Some “symbols”
a plate
a tin plate
a paper plate
a glass plate
a china plate
a plate in the mud
a plate on the road
a plate under water
in a tree
a cracked plate
an empty plate
a bloody plate
a greasy plate
a chipped plate
a shattered plate
now play the game with any noun or verb modified
how exciting
everything means more than what it is
everything has a story
all being signifies more than what it is
nothing is without symbolism
you can’t give me too much.